该话题隶属于城市问题、交通与环境、政府政策三大范畴,具体围绕traffic congestion(交通拥堵)、public transport(公共交通)及 government solutions(政府解决方案)展开,是雅思写作考试中极高频的话题之一,稳居 Top10高频话题。其相关思路、核心词汇及实用句型均可提前筹备、反复练习并灵活套用。
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Should governments spend more money on public transport?
The best way to reduce traffic congestion is to increase the cost of petrol.
Governments should encourage people to use public transport instead of private cars.
The solution to traffic gridlocks is worth consideration, and certain advocates propose that a nonstop, completely free public transit option is the best way to resolve this issue. Even though such a scheme may have short-term results, I generally disagree with this argument because congestion is a multi-dimensional problem requiring a flexible and more ambitious plan to mitigate.
译文:解决交通拥堵的方案值得考量,部分倡导者提出,提供不间断、完全免费的公共交通是解决该问题的最佳方式。尽管这类方案或许能产生短期效果,但我总体上不认同这一观点,因为交通拥堵是一个多维度的问题,需要更灵活、更具远见的方案来缓解。
Firstly, we have to admit that fewer people may be inclined to buy their own private vehicle if they have access to public transportationfree of charge. It is definitely possible that when a free public transit policy is introduced, a number of urban residents may forgo their plans of buying their own car or motorbike, and some portion of car owners may even switch to using the free public transit options, alleviating congestion on the city roads.
译文:首先,我们必须承认,如果人们可以免费使用公共交通,愿意购买私家车的人可能会减少。当免费公共交通政策推行后,不少城市居民确实有可能放弃购车或买摩托车的计划,部分车主甚至会转而选择免费公共交通,从而缓解城市道路的拥堵状况。
However, as public transit commuters witness fewer cars on the road, they would inevitably be tempted to swap their present circumstances, being cramped into subway carriage or bus with a sea of strangers, for the freedom and comfort offered by driving their own cars on those unobstructed roads. Then, the pendulum swings the other way and we will see the number of private cars on the road increase until we return to the congestion equilibrium created by people looking to commute faster on public transit running up against others wanting the comfort of private vehicles.
译文:然而,当公共交通通勤者看到路上车辆减少时,他们难免会心生向往:不愿再和大批陌生人一起挤地铁或公交,转而想在通畅的道路上自驾,享受自驾的自由与舒适。如此一来,局势便会逆转,路上私家车数量会再度回升,直至回归拥堵平衡状态—— 想靠公共交通快速通勤的人,与想享受私家车舒适的人形成对峙,拥堵便会重现。
Furthermore, congestion is not an issue that persists around the clock, specifically, it occurs during rush hour each day. Thus, offering bus routes in the middle of the night for free will have no impact on the number of passengers going to and from work at standard times each day, which is a primary factor in traffic congestion. In other words, this problem cannot be solved with a brute force, one-size-fits-allapproach. Conversely, since we cannot realistically change the time when most people go to work each day, national governments might offer incentives to change where people go to work. If we believe that too many people traveling toward the same location, namely city centers, is a root cause of congestion, then it follows that governments can establish additional “city centers” in other parts of the city, diversifyingwhere head offices and commercial hubsare located, diverting traffic in a multitude of directions, and hopefully reducing the overall time people are in their cars bumper-to-bumper. Or better yet, the government can incentivize economic growth in smaller towns through building up basic infrastructure such as more modern road planning compared to older cities, attracting people to move away from crowded and congested cities towards these newly developed regions with less traffic.
译文:此外,交通拥堵并非全天候存在,具体而言,它仅出现在每日的高峰时段。因此,夜间免费开通公交线路,对每日固定时段上下班的客流毫无影响,而这部分客流正是造成交通拥堵的主要原因。换言之,该问题无法通过简单粗暴、一刀切的方式解决。相反,既然我们难以改变大多数人的上班时间,各国政府可通过提供激励政策来改变人们的上班地点。如果我们认为大量人群涌向同一区域(即市中心)是拥堵的根本原因,那么政府便可在城市其他区域增设新的 “市中心”,分散总部与商业中心的布局,将车流疏导至不同方向,有望减少人们在车水马龙、首尾相接中耗费的整体时间。更理想的方式是:政府可通过完善基础基础设施(如比老城区更现代化的道路规划),激励小城镇经济发展,吸引人们离开拥挤拥堵的大城市,迁往车流更少的新兴区域。
In summary, I do not believe that a 24/7 free public transit is the miracle cure for congestion, even though it may see positive results in the immediate future. We have to remember that traffic jams are the result of multiple variables, and our solution has to match its complexity.
译文:总之,我认为全天候免费公共交通并非解决拥堵的万能良方,尽管它在短期内或许能带来积极效果。我们必须牢记:交通拥堵是多重因素共同作用的结果,解决方案也必须与其复杂性相匹配。
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